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2011-12 Writing Finalists
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Alexandria Robertson
Helena, Alabama
"The Female Spirit Attempting Flight in To the Happiness of Women"
First Place Platinum Award

It is our grandmothers, our mothers, our daughters, our sisters, and, of course, we who are attempting flight in Remedios Varo’s painting Au Bonheur Des Dames (To the Happiness of Women). We are portrayed as if Varo painted our self-portraits from the flesh, the pigments combining to reveal our inner covets. We are the women with wheels attached naturally to our limbs, the birds without the wind through the wings, but a dream weaved between the feathers. All of us, along with the nine women in the painting, share this intangible dream: we want to truly know and achieve freedom.

To the Happiness of Women is the intertwining of female spirit everywhere. In this surrealist painting the wheels are symbols of that female spirit—the passionate and desirable nature—attempting flight, attempting to be free. Yet, have women achieved freedom within and outside of this painting? Varo discreetly answers this question with the use of the wheel. The wheel is the point of attraction; it is what makes the viewer tilt the head and simply ask why? A wheel can provide the desperation of certainty that one may reach unreachable heights. Remedios Varo masters this infinite desire in To the Happiness of Women by revealing nine women with wheels serving as legs. The wheel may be a metaphor for flight, but it also represents the inability to fully achieve that flight, that interior and exterior freedom that these women are so desperate to achieve. Irony is visible within this symbolization of the wheel, in that the wheel is preventing the women to reach ultimate freedom, causing a confinement to the earth. Women in present society correlate with this irony, and although the wheel is not visible, we each have one within us: we call it desire.

Golden hues radiate brilliantly from the contours of To the Happiness of Women, as if Varo literally painted with the pieces of the sun. The use of gold creates a strong atmosphere of hope—the journey to that Golden Dream, which spins the internal and external wheels of these nine women, like the rotation of the wheel of dharma. The golden rays light the path for these women, pulling and leading each of them forward to the destination of their desire. However, what happens when a person reaches the light at the end of tunnel? In this case, the cycle continues repeatedly; the wheels continue to spin; the light grows brighter, but also appears farther and farther away as if it is only an illusion. The golden dream for these women continues to be just that—a dream.

A concentration on the desires of human life can eventually spur a loss of identity for any such individual devoted to a single, specific desire. The women in To the Happiness of Women are a prime example of the loss of identity due to their desperation of attempting flight and the desperation of accomplishing the Golden Dream. The focus on following desire ultimately leads the women into a state of mechanization—machines that do not think, only do. The golden rays in the painting actually bring the women into a replacement shop for wheels. The dream and desire cannot stop spinning, because the women are consistently being led into this shop, which is entitled Au Bonheur des Citoyens or To the Happiness of Citizens. Once again Varo brings irony into the world of art: the nine women are desperate to achieve freedom and to reach the Golden dream; however, they are being limited by society and encouraged to continue acting as machines, resulting in the confinement to Earth. If women act as machines, then society can benefit, being the sole reason that the shop is entitled To the Happiness of Citizens.

Will the nine women in the painting ever truly achieve freedom? Or, most importantly, will women in general ever truly achieve freedom? Remedios Varo painted the answer to both of these questions through the use of symbolization, color, and theme. The painting is a poem itself, a story for women everywhere with underlying literary elements such as metaphors and irony that contribute to the message of the painting. These literary elements display female spirit at its highest and at its lowest, while also showing that our dreams for freedom will never cease.

Emily Lenart
Terra Ceia, Florida
Second Place Gold Award

For a total book lover and aspiring writer such as myself, having the chance to spend time with and trade pieces of work with such legendary authors as F. Scott Fitzgerald and Ernest Hemingway would be the ultimate fan encounter. Thanks to Woody Allen’s latest masterpiece, Midnight in Paris, like-minded moviegoers have the opportunity to get a glimpse of what that might be like as well as experience a hearty dose of the Roaring Twenties: Paris-style.

Gil, played by Owen Wilson, is a successful screenwriter with a higher literary calling. Despite reaching the epitome of success by film industry standards, he has grown tired of being a “Hollywood hack” and wants to turn his attention to the roots of his craft. With this is mind, Gil sets out to do what so many of his predecessors have attempted: write the next, all-too-elusive “Great American Novel”.

However, as all writers and artists know, inspiration is a fickle thing and it is often very hard to come by. Gil’s situation is no different. No matter what he does, it seems as though his muse has left him without so much as a decent plot-line. If only he could speak to the figures of the past that he adores so much, maybe then he would finally stumble upon a kernel of genius and be well on his way to following in their footsteps.

One night, as his fiancée dances with friends, Gil loses his way and finds himself stumbling through the streets of Paris in a part of town where it seems as though no one speaks English. Just as he is about to resign himself to his misfortune, the clock strikes midnight and his life changes forever. Barreling out of the darkness comes an antique car filled to bursting with a gang of merry, 1920’s-style partygoers. They coerce him into joining them and the adventure begins.

Suddenly, Gil finds himself in time long ago: Cole Porter provides background music, the eccentric, yet well-meaning Fitzgerald’s socialize, and Ernest Hemingway himself squirrels away the never-ending night armed with a glass of whiskey and a leather-bound notebook. It is here the Gil finally begins to understand what his novel-and by extension, his life- lacks.

Every night, at the stroke of midnight, the car comes for Gil and sweeps him back into this fairytale world where he learns the sad truth that, no matter who you are or where (or when) you are from, the grass will always seem greener on the other side.

Allen’s colorful if not nostalgically hazy representation of life for the “Lost Generation”, as Hemingway once referred to it, contrasts sharply with the beige-colored realm inhabited by Gil’s fiancée, Inez (Rachel McAdams), her parents, and her friends. Whereas Gil’s nights are smoky and loud, his days are filled with endless museum tours. On one particular occasion, Gil shocks everyone with his intimate knowledge of one of Picasso’s works- one that, in fact, he had just seen the artist himself perfecting the night before.

An encounter with Picasso’s beautiful mistress leads Gil to wonder where he really belongs, but he finds himself shocked to discover that she asks herself the same question. Despite living in what Gil considers to be the greatest time period, she has convinced herself that life would be better in France’s Belle Époque era which she considers to be the “Golden Age”.

This film, with its picturesque cinematography and bouncing, evocative score transports the audience right alongside Gil to a time that is widely fantasized. It also does an excellent job of introducing the audience to the extraordinary city that is Paris. The opening montage of the city’s rainy streets is breathtaking and gorgeous, making even the most cynical person want to book a ticket to the next flight to the City of Lights.

Beyond all of that, however, is a touching commentary on nostalgia and the value of the rosy views of the past so many hold. Allen’s message is that, too often, we spend so much time looking back with fond eyes at what used to be and wonder if life was better in any other time but ours. While it is important to always remember our heritage, we need to realize that the people back then had the same troubles that we have now. Their lives were not perfect no matter how much they are idealized today. Instead, we should focus on and be grateful for what we have here in this millennium. If everyone were to life that way, perhaps the 2000’s- our time- would become a truly Golden Age.

Alexandra Failing
Indianola, Mississippi
Third Place Silver Award

Sequential art is an often-neglected yet potent genre of art. Its fundamental composition and expressiveness, and contemporary elements make it the most effective art form for conveying emotion and ideas, such as in Tatsuya Ishida’s piece “Barack Star.”

Ishida’s first technique of composition – his choice of color palette – effectively draws his audience’s eye to key points in each frame. He uses cool colors for backgrounds but uses warm colors, which naturally attract the human eye, for focal elements; notice Sarah Piglin’s auburn hair focusing panel one on the pun of her name, Monique’s magenta hair balancing panel two, and Barack Star’s red tie in panel three and yellow guitar in panel ten both centering the viewer’s attention on him.

Once Ishida has captured the spectator’s eye, he keeps its interest by presenting it with recognizable forms to process: each character is comprised of simple geometric shapes. Sarah Piglin consists of circles, rounded triangles, and canted cylinders. Barack Star incorporates primarily right triangles and irregular trapezoids. The use of such simple forms not only eases the observer’s recognition of characters, but it also implants stereotypes consistent with their portrayal by Ishida: Sarah Piglin’s circular form is unwittingly viewed as blundering, while Barack Star’s more angular composition comes across as edgy and adept.

A second use of color theory, contour shading, brings depth and dimension to “Barack Star” without distracting the eyes of the reader from the narrative progression. Ishida creates form with no more than three colors for each surface: one color with one pastel and one shade. His placement of each color in basic contour shapes creates movement, such as Barack Star’s swishing coat in panel five, and conveys intensity in character’s actions, such as Barack Star’s rock-‘n’-rolling posture in panel seven. Movements like these are essential to sequential art; they keep the piece from becoming stagnant and help the narrative flow more smoothly. Ishida’s simplistic technique for creating the components of movement progress his storyline with ease but without diversions.

Color schemes and character geometry are all very good and necessary, but they fall flat and meaningless unless the artist is also able to convey emotions in his work. Ishida uses universal body language to convey Barack Star’s mood in each panel. In panel two, Ishida draws Barack Star with wide-planted feet and straight-set shoulders to express his confidence in entering, and in panel four a detail as simple as his relaxed fingers flicking away a cigarette show how at ease he is with his surroundings. Barack Star’s upturned face and cradling arms in panel nine leave the reader with no doubt of his passion for his rock-‘n’-roll, while his bowed arms and swaggering step are clearly challenging Sarah Piglin in panel twelve. Simple body motions like these happen countless times a day without people noticing; by harnessing them and drawing them in a simple, clear way, Ishida is able to show his audience exactly how his characters feel without any explanation. His skills as an artist ensure that the viewers can recognize his message naturally, without any harsh contemplation.

While Ishida’s stylistic techniques make “Barack Star” aesthetically pleasing, they do not guarantee a clear message of thought. For this, Ishida must incorporate elements that will encourage his audience to keep reading. These contemporary elements are one of the most essential qualities of sequential art.

Parodies, the first use of popular culture, not only draw the reader in, but also create a framework for the entire piece and further demonstrate the nature of Barack Star. By using widely recognized songs – “Oops, I Did It Again” by Britney Spears and a parody of “American Woman” by The Guess Who – Tatsuya Ishida provides his audience with a reference that they can identify with. By bringing the audience into “Barack Star” on a personal level, he insures that they will continue reading because they feel like a part of the art. The parodies also help build on Ishida’s portrayal of his characters. His choice of pairing Sarah Piglin with a scandalous artist’s pop ditty glorifying infidelity and Barack Star with a classic rock anthem calling for the removal of a temptress furthers his characterization of their politically charged, juke-joint battle: an upstanding champion for the honest man opposing a distasteful charlatan.

Ishida’s second reference to popular culture, his inclusion of current events, is the foundation of “Barack Star.” By parodying a tense presidential race, he provides his audience with another personal connection to his art, and he pokes fun at the political situation in a way that his readers find clever and pleasing. Also, by building the entire comedy on his parodies, he creates an ending that the viewers feel connected to, as if the parodies throughout the piece were a sort of private joke between themselves and Ishida. This sort of personal connection between Tatsuya Ishida and his fans is the most powerful aspect of his artwork in “Barack Star.” It brings his vision as an artist together with the eye of the public under the light of the world’s events, a perfect example of the potency of sequential art.

Laura Silva
Sunrise, Florida
Honorable Mention

The way artists mold and reshape memories and sentiments into canvases is incredible. The idea of making a mental image a vivid reality flourishes in the hands of Frida Kahlo. It’s not only the way this magnificent Mexican artist combines orange and yellow to make the skin of her subjects appear highlighted against the rest of the composition, but the way she paints faces in a way that embodies the emotion she is trying to conceive –and this purpose is clearly accomplished.

Frida Kahlo was a painter in the 50’s whose creations reflected her inner feeling and outer experiences. She, unlike most famous artists who painted what was happening in their era or what happened before their time, composed masterpieces based on the sturdy, sagacious woman she was. There is no socially constructed perspective in her painting; however, she mastered the capacity of blending surrealistic art with controversial distinctiveness, thus attracting an audience whose artistic desire was dying to be resurrected. She was a woman, a sister, a niece, a daughter, a woman who loved men, a woman who loved women, a woman who loved men who love women too much, and a woman whose womanhood and capacity to create from her own was shattered by a malicious accident. This was the event that transformed her life, and the life of her art.

In the composition of her painting, Henry Ford Hospital, the results of her atrocious accident are perceived in the unique style that only Kahlo has the power of emanating. This is an elaborated composition based on the reality that begun as a forming, self-depended woman, and followed her to her grave as an obsolete object; it is her memoirs on a canvas. Her background is a sky with mixed tones of pink and green –not quite harmonious as any other daytime visual imagine. It evokes a sense of the impending storms that overwhelmed her melancholic reality. Toward the middle, extended across her evolving symphony of agonistic reality, is a jungle of metal and straight lines. Kahlo composed an inoperative factory; machinery that no longer fulfills its duties and can no longer functions properly. This image represents herself and her inability to reproduce and produce the one thing she desires the most: a child of her own. Her original background, Mexico, a paradise, serves and an understanding of the way she was raised. Colors and sounds of purity and bliss invaded her surroundings; thus, by incorporating this rigid atmosphere into her composition, the audience understands the juxtaposition of her reality and her memories. And after having imposed a sense of solitude into the viewer, the bottom of her artwork, which constituted of an ominous greenish, yellowish color or dirty and sterile miserable ground, lets out the true identity of this masterpiece: an unfathomable sorrow.

The surrounding setting showcases the Mona Lisa of this creation. There she lies on a bed of elegant bloody pedals, surrounded by six elements of dubious aspect, which escape from her hand, giving the idea that it is out of her reach the possibility of changing her reality. On top of her bed, a floating fetus appears which gives an explanation to her sanguinary surrounding: this is the life she desperately intends to create, but it keeps vanishing from her crushed, mourning body. Perhaps, this was the masterpiece, the piece of herself she wanted to leave in this world as a memorial of who she was, but instead, canvases were painted. On the top, we observe a gray snail –this is an animal known for its sluggish motion, which is a clear interpretation of the dawdling, excruciating, even dishonorable process of her abortion. On the bottom right, a cracked, creepy looking pelvis creates her view of what kind of rustic artifact she was trying to operate with. Leading, then, to a withered purple orchid, once again demonstrating her anguished desire to create life, which is formed and evolves up to a certain point where destiny keeps denying its possibility of a full external existence. Kahlo paints a metallic instrument along with natural object to create the contrast of the living and the dead, of what is God-made and handmade, of what is planned to exist and what is pushed into existence. Lastly, a woman’s abdominal apparatus is shown in the upper left corner. The base of life, the Holy Grail of ultimate accomplishment for a woman is to bring life into this; therefore, if a woman were not able to fulfill this atmospheric demand of society, she was useless. This immaculate figure of fountain of life is illustrated in her perspective of a woman’s torso.

This is the saddest piece she’s ever done. This absolutely astonishing creation relates the tale of a reality brutally dictated to a woman whose capability to describe it was at its finest. Her pain was vast, but she disguised it behind a curtain of polemical yet artificial security and paint. We can never underestimate what an artist is really trying to say, to scream. This woman was a true genius, both for her ability to manifest and explore and idea at it maximum potential and the way she silently suffered for her inability to exhale life. Destiny has mysterious ways of showing us what we are made for.

Aubrey Burrough
Melbourne, Florida
Honorable Mention

Art is not single shaded. It is a broadly perceivable umbrella term of creative expression. I believe in the art of prose. I take solace in the articulate flow of sounds and characters morphed into rhetorical meaning. Charles Warnke, a struggling writer known only by a small slice of the internet, is an artist. Warnke’s essay “You Should Date an Illiterate Girl” categorizes two distinct paths of romantic intent. Through a striking balance of asyndeton and polysyndeton sentence structure, and a logos/pathos appeal, Warnke encapsulates his reader with intricate imagery, diction, and syntax. “You Should Date an Illiterate Girl” becomes as personal to any girl who reads as it is to the author himself; an undeniably remarkable quality of Warnke’s writing.

Warnke compares a boring life spent with an illiterate girl to the turmoil caused by dating a girl who reads. In a didactic tone, he satirically describes the monotony of a life with an illiterate girl, recommending that “you” should date her. He remains disconnected throughout the beginning of the piece, employing a strictly logos appeal. The illiterate girl is an archetype of the middle class standard of “love and happiness.” A relationship with her is of predestined conventionalism, leaving no room for any real passion or creative ambition. Warnke further communicates this repetitious life through his syntax and diction. He employs asyndetic sentence, as asyndeton without a proper balance of polysyndeton is boring to read, directly paralleling the illiterate girl’s boring lifelong qualities. Immediately before death, the man who married the illiterate girl feels a heavy burden of regret, having spent a lifetime in an indifferent rut. But the illiterate girl has been satisfied in her trivial existence, having known no greater romantic counterpart to yearn for. Warnke expresses dating an illiterate girl would be easy, but it becomes evident that a “life in purgatory” will leave a person with nothing but expired hopes and ill-lived dreams.

The girl who reads is less of an archetype. While describing this girl, Warnke’s tone switches from disconnected didacticism to indignant frustration. He exchanges his impersonal instruction for polysyndeton syntax and personal fluidity. He elicits pathos appeal. His high register vocabulary parallels that of the girl who reads, as she has “a vocabulary that can describe that amorphous discontent of a life unfulfilled.” It is difficult to love her because it is even more difficult for her to requite this love. The author reveals personal ground by employing a first person pronoun: “my vacuous sophistry a cheap trick.” He realizes his intellectual inferiority and becomes frustrated. Warnke cleverly incorporates rhetorical writing strategies, attempting to convince the reader that “nothing sucks worse than a girl who reads.” “A girl who reads understands syntax;” which becomes evident as he argues through a run-on sentence that the girl who reads will realize a problem that will ‘run on:’

“The entrenched habits of someone’s bitter cynicism will run on, run on well past any point of reason or purpose, run on far after she has packed a bag and said a reluctant goodbye and she has decided that I am an ellipsis and not a period and run on and run on.”

The author knows he is not a ‘period’ to the girl who reads, displaying the maturity to accept this. Warnke continues to argue his point through relevant English terms, as the girl who reads knows the importance of plot. She will recognize the “demarcations of a prologue and the sharp ridges of a climax” and eradicate its very source. The girl who reads knows the “ineluctable significance of an end.” She is fine with ending a relationship because she has “bid farewell to a thousand heroes,” accepting the ends of their stories with “only a twinge of sadness. She is a storyteller herself, refusing to live a life unworthy of being told.

In the final paragraph of his piece, Warnke becomes indignant, as he abandons his definitive distance through the anaphora of “you,” which signals a protruding conclusion. The girl who reads is not trolling in a club like the illiterate girl. She is reading in the corner of a café, dependant only upon herself for intellectual stimulation. The girl who reads would rather hold a book than an ignorant man’s hand. Warnke, confirmed as the speaker, is hurt by this, but he is not disrespectful. Warnke concludes his essay controversially: “Take the next southbound train and take your Hemingway with you. I really, really hate you.”

This is easy to misinterpret. Warnke does not hate the girl who reads, but rather his disheartening inability to obtain her. It is not uncommon to find oneself consumed with the idealistic image of “the one who got away.” The author has let the girl who reads go, because she has “dreamed properly” of somebody better. He simply has immaturely hidden his sense of loss through the colloquial assertion of hatred.

So perhaps you should date an illiterate girl. You’ll surely be irrevocably spared a vast quantity of negative emotions; but a life in the hell is better than a life in purgatory. ‘Nothing sucks worse’ than feeling numb throughout the entirety of one’s life. “You Should Date an Illiterate Girl” is art because it has no clear definite meaning. It reaches each individual mind’s differently, causing separate patterns of thought and emotion. In likelihood, art has no clear concise meaning. It should consume the senses of each human being uniquely, and on rare occasion: entirely. For me, Charles Warnke’s “You Should Date an Illiterate Girl,” does just that.

Harley Prophitt
Senoia, Georgia
"Artistic Analysis of 'Tranquility'"
Honorable Mention

The photograph ‘Tranquility’ has many aesthetic elements that make it an enjoyable piece of art. The photo was taken by Stanley Prophitt in 2006 at Cade’s Cove which is a trail inside the Great Smoky Mountains National Park located in Tennessee. It was printed with the dimensions of 16x24 and hangs inside the Prophitt family home. The photo’s contrasting colors, focus point, depth and many other artistic elements sends a message of uttermost ecstasy in the vast world of nature. These elements also give an insight to the tranquil existence of nature and mirrors what the human race should in theory consist of.

The color and texture contrast is a very noticeable element in the photograph. One of the most notable elements of the photo, is the rich green luster of the foliage contrasting with the soft white luminosity of the peaceful stream water. Many variations of the colored green trees makes the forrest seem inviting and mystical, while the blurred white river mimics innocent power of mother nature. White, which is noticeably seen in the stream is commonly associated with peace, while green, seen in the forrest is grouped with labels such as well-being, fertility and balance. Surrounding the river is a large amount of foliage which appears rough and undefined, while the river seems to be in a rhythmic flow. This shows that these two different textures can morph together to make a visually appealing sight. The stream in the photograph seems to gently glide through the vast green foliage of the Smoky Mountains, which also represents how nature has an integral nirvana within itself.

‘Tranquility’ was taken with a slow shutter speed to capture the gentle but fast paced movement of the Smoky Mountain water. The vanishing point of the stream was placed towards the back right of the picture to fall in the lines of the widely used rule of thirds. The eye of the viewer is automatically drawn to the vanishing point and there is a curious desire to investigate the remainder of the stream. The water sifts over and around the large rocks without hindrance and insinuates a moral of overcoming obstacles and the vital process of moving forward not backwards. The photo shows how everything has its own designated place and how everything goes together like magic.

The various light and dark spots in the canopy, above the stream, coincides with the light and dark times throughout anyone’s life. Also, the stream signifies life’s renewal by the constant flow of fresh water. Along the sides of the river, are lines that draw the viewers eye to the vanishing point in the middle right of the photo. Above the stream, is an ample amount of tree space that reveals the complexity of the woods, which makes the stream seem simple and balances the composition. The perspective the photo was taken at, makes the stream seem as if it is going to flow off of the picture. The stream gradually gets larger as the pictures goes downward.

‘Tranquility’ is without a doubt a magnificent work of art, but it also deeply speaks about the core of human nature and the inner workings of the raw, untamed world. The photos exposure, rich colors, perspective and its uncut state makes it beautiful and appealing to any viewer’s eye. There are so many details in the photo that make it meaningful and morally sound. This work of art is much more than a well taken photo, it is a frozen moment of time that paints a crystal clear example of a harmonious life and the true foundation of tranquility.

Parker Sams
Norcross, Georgia

In their time on this earth, many people make mistakes that they deeply regret. Many people have done things that they are not proud of, and many of them want to atone for their transgressions. Some of these people reach that catharsis. Still others fall short, failing to right the wrongs they've done. In Rockstar Games's Western epic Red Dead Redemption, players experience a story of greed, betrayal, revenge, and corruption. But as a game that lives up to its name, quite literally, gamers are shown the journeys of three men who are trying to achieve that redemption. One succeeds. Another fails. But the last man is left confused, wondering if he did attain reparation, or if he is just drifting in this violent and hostile world where justice is simple and mercy is rare.

The man who succeeds is John Marston. A former gang member, he was dropped by his fellow criminals after being gravely wounded in a bank robbery gone wrong. The fallout leads to John settling at his ranch with his wife, Abigail, and his son, Jack. However, the Bureau of Investigation, the shady governmental agency that began snaking its way further west, kidnaps John's family and forces him to hunt down his former brothers in arms. Though John is murdering the men who once stood by his side, the journey is symbolic in a way. He is destroying his crime-riddled past with each new bullet, perhaps stepping further and further towards the atonement he searches for. But it is also darkly ironic, as each new bullet equals another man murdered, and it's as if John never left the life of an outlaw. So question stands: is he marching towards redemption? Or moving further away from it? Rockstar provides the answer with John’s last stand. After John finally went home to his family, The Bureau came to eliminate the final member of John's gang: himself. After an intense shootout, Abigail, Jack, and John are forced into their barn, backed into a corner. Once John saw to it that his wife and son have safely rode out the back, he peeks through the front doors, takes a deep breath, and walks into the open. The player can try to take out as many enemies as possible, but the hail of gunfire is inevitable – John Marston dies gasping for air, swaying on his knees. But by sacrificing himself, he allows his wife and son to escape safely so the Bureau won't hound them anymore. It's a shocking and amazing conclusion to John's story that leaves a bittersweet taste in the player's mouth; the taste of redemption tinged with the feeling of grief.

But while John did attain the deliverance he sought, the leader he used to look up to did not meet such an end. Dutch van der Linde began the outlaw life as an idealistic rogue, stealing from the rich and giving to the poor. This charismatic Robin Hood personality is what drew John and the other members to Dutch in the first place, and it's this romanticized philosophy that they used to justify the heinous crimes they committed. Dutch sought to change the world through his example, but he slowly came to realize the futility of his cause. As new technology sprang up and the government that he so rejected stretched its jaws further west, Dutch saw that he failed. This gave way to his descent into madness, and he masked it with pointless violence and unfocused anger. The only thing he changed was himself. Rockstar painted Dutch as the ultimate tragic figure, as he realized that we “can't always fight nature...we can't fight change...we can't fight nothin'”. Yet he couldn't give up, couldn't fight his own nature. Dutch had reached an impasse, a paradox. He never achieved catharsis with the world that he had so fiercely fought against, and in the end when he killed himself by falling to his death, Dutch's chance at redemption died along with him.

The last man left standing at the end of Red Dead Redemption is John's son, Jack. Players are re-introduced to Jack three years following John’s death, with the nineteen year old burying his dead mother next to his deceased father. While the player can technically play Jack as a virtuous cowboy, Rockstar sets the game up so that most players end up going on a county wide crime-spree. This is brilliant design on Rockstar's part, as it portrays a dark connection to Jack and his father, since John wanted Jack to avoid the life of an outlaw at all costs. Jack's attempt at redemption, however, isn't as clear cut like John's was. The last side-quest that player can undertake is pursuing Edgar Ross, the man who forced John back into the outlaw life and ultimately murdered him. After Jack follows a lead to find Ross out near Lake Don Julio, he finds the Bureau agent out fishing for crawdads. The final standoff is the one place I feel Rockstar faltered. The duel begins with the enemy’s name fading in on the top of the screen and the camera slowly panning over each man. Though this sets the scene as an epic Western standoff, it felt very “gamey” and it was too fair a fight. When the Bureau murdered John, the fight was overwhelmingly one-sided, with 25 to 1 odds. I feel that this last draw would have been better as a freeform shootout, with Ross being killed without a second’s hesitation on the player’s part. It would have complemented the final cutscene better, when Jack looks at his weapon, pondering this conclusion to his family’s story and outlining another parallel with his father’s own journey. Did he arrive at redemption’s door? Or did he move further from it? As Jack walks towards the camera and the credits roll, the player is left to find their own answer and decide for themselves if they reached that true redemption we all long for.

Megan Fogg
Acworth, Georgia

“I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead, /I lift my lids and all is born again.”- Sylvia Plath. While studying my critique piece, I have concluded that I no longer exist in black and white. I remember that all of the shapes blended into one another and tiny film grains sprinkled across my vision like an old-fashioned movie. The walls which surrounded me were cinder-block and frozen, and the ceiling hung so low my breath came out jagged and quick, in my claustrophobia. I was vulnerable in black and white.

I imagine that being caged in black and white was a piece of writer Sylvia Plath’s tortured reality. Although she was successful, physically attractive, and brilliantly talented, Plath existed in ubiquitous darkness. I believe that the art piece I have chosen to critique masterfully portrays this tragedy through watercolor and mixed media.

This Sylvia Plath portrait, entitled, “Lady Lazarus,” was done by artist Acey Thompson. Although it is primarily watercolor, the top right-hand corner is an actual black and white photograph of Plath, stitched to the remainder of the piece. Upon first my glance at “Lady Lazarus,” I noticed the impeccable resemblance to the writer. I marvel at the technical accuracy that has been achieved in such a surreal quality. The colors chosen are subdued yet alive, dripping down the eerie facsimile of the famous Plath image. The watercolor media accomplishes this effect quite well. Thompson used light and dark values in a more abstracted way, while still attaining realistic detail. The mood of “Lady Lazarus” is haunting.

“Is there no way out of the mind?” -Sylvia Plath. Upon reflecting on my experience in the black and white, my movement was stiff and robot-like. I was made of glass or porcelain, caged and breakable. When the entire world carried on, I stood still. My surroundings fell silent, but I would never rest. There was still static crackling in my ears, a rustling within my core. Black and white is insomnia.

I regard Thompson’s piece highly, as both a visual artist and an admirer of Plath’s phenomenon. This artwork commands attention from both artistic and literary perspectives. I believe that “Lady Lazarus” is a brilliant appreciation of Plath’s work and a somber reflection on her life. The emotions that burst forth when I study this piece are deep admiration; for both Thompson and Plath, sadness, and even a sense of yearning. This piece has moved me to create my own Sylvia portrait, in all of her physical beauty, set in black and white.

There are certain aspects of the work, such as the running paint, the stitching, and the black and white photo, which the artist intended as symbolism. As I stated earlier, I believe this piece masterfully depicts the tragedies of Sylvia Plath’s personal life. The symbolism of her earthly hell comes into play with this. The artist chose to work in a slightly unruly manner to achieve an imperfect, frenetic look.

“Lady Lazarus” has intrinsic value and worth because it is a form of tribute for the brilliant and influential American author and poet, Sylvia Plath. It is visually appealing, unique, and technically well done. I know the piece has affected me, as well as other artists and Plath readers. The phrase, “eyes can tell a story,” comes to mind. I believe that this portrait not only tells a story, but shares a world of beauty and strife.

Olivia Runyon
Rolla, Missouri
"Painting Another Dimension"

\At the age of eight, Akiane Kramarik painted Jesus. Her early childhood consisted of visions and dreams she claimed to experience that depicted faces, alternate worlds, colors, and voices, which she believed to include the very voice of God. This same voice inspired her to paint her vision of Christ in a work she entitled Prince of Peace (Kramarik). This portrait of her Savior is a piece of artwork created with not only excellent technique and form, but also holding a great presence and inspiration for all viewers.

A self-taught artist, Kramarik began sketching her visions at the age of four, creating astounding detail uncommon for children her age. This amazing talent for capturing the detail, form, and very essence of a subject, usually associated with experienced and practiced artists, sharpened throughout her childhood and is very much evident in Prince of Peace. The painting exhibits a natural talent for expressing the human face through oil paints, but includes fine points of detail which hint at the man’s element of divinity. The eyes portrayed are infinite, hollow and occupied simultaneously, holding a gaze with the viewer only paralleled by that of a real person. Each shade of the face is indisputably convincing and speaks of light and life together in one being. The heavy eyebrows pull downward, forming a slight furrow between them, symbolic of a similar weight placed on the Son of God in human form: heavy in its own manner, and emphasizing the purpose painted into his expression. The sharp nose is a feature common in the image on the Shroud of Turin, adding a distinct element of human diversity, and the shadow play upon the face is a wonderful execution of value.

The face within Prince of Peace is one which many have visualized within their own minds. It is a significant portrait attempted by many artists throughout time, with a great importance in the Christian church. Kramarik’s particular version of the face of Christ is one very convincing portrait. The painting is significant because the technique and physical artistic skill were mastered, but the piece was taken one step farther into a fourth dimension of art. There is heart and soul behind the surface: Akiane’s as well as those of the man she has painted. She has captured a piece of humanity, a piece of holiness, an emotion, a thought, a spirit within her painting that is unmistakable. This facet of Prince of Peace grasps the viewer at first glimpse and draws them in to observe more. Even a second glance does not permit all that Kramarik describes to be uncovered to the eye, and that is the definition of artistic talent.

Of the many works of art created by Akiane Kramarik, her depiction of Christ in Prince of Peace is one of the best. Within this portrait, she is able to describe with her brush something for which words fail. In the history of artistic representations of the Son of God, Kramarik’s Prince of Peace should be placed next to DaVinci’s The Last Supper and Landowski’s Christ the Redeemer. The painting is full of passion and inspiration, and is an obvious exhibit of the artist’s talent and skill. Whether or not Akiane Kramarik’s Prince of Peace is an accurate portrait of Christ’s human form is extraneous; it is an excellent work of art which takes oil portraits to a new degree of awe-inspiring heights.

Works Cited

Kramarik, Akiane. Interview by Enrique Cerna. Conversations. Public Broadcasting Service. KCTS 9, 16 Aug. 2010. Web. 5 Nov. 2011. http://video.kcts9.org/video/1565082264.

Jessica Enfinger
Hephzibah, Georgia
"The Reception of a Painting"

John Frederick Lewis’s painting, A Lady Receiving Visitors (The Reception), is nothing more than just a painting of an exotic household; at least that is what I thought when I first saw The Reception in my friend’s art history book. As I continued to look at the oil on panel painting, I became more and more fascinated with the intricate details of Lewis’s painting. Lewis paints of a lady lounging in her Egyptian-styled, mosaic-rich home. The lady’s wealth is apparent with the display of richness in decoration of her room and the many servants that are attending to her.

The painting is obviously centered on the elegant lady in a main chamber of a room. As she lounges on an upholstered divan, her servants are all facing her. In the reflecting pool, the image of her is echoed across the bottom of the painting. Not only are the servants and the reflecting pool focused on the lady, but most of the line-shaped items, such as the pattern of the floor and the wall moldings, of the room are directed towards the lady as well. The use of warm and cool colors brings Lewis’s painting to life. The orange colors that permeate the room suggest warmth in the outside air, and the blue of the upholstered divan suggests coolness of the lady’s environment. By looking at The Reception, you can feel the coolness of the room on a hot summer day. The form of the room captures the wealth of the whole room and the direct perspective on the lady. The décor of the room in which the lady resides is great in detail as if displaying her wealth, from the complex sunlit window designs to the elaborate ceiling pattern. A gazelle, also present in the chamber of the lady, is another indication of the lady’s wealth. Gazelles were popular domestic pets in the upper-Egyptian homes and were also seen as symbol of female beauty. (USAD, 86)

The wealth of the lady compares to the wealth of the details in Lewis’s painting style. In The Reception, the details of the room are crucial to the painting’s story. Through his painting, Lewis is able to document a culture that the average British viewer would never see. (USAD, 85) Lewis’s details on the painting are so precise and perfect that his brush strokes are not seen and the painting appears to be a photograph. Lewis’s main focus of the details in the painting helps viewers to comprehend the wealth and significance of the lady. It was said that most of Lewis’s paintings chronicled his travels in North Africa. (Burgess) Did he know or meet this great lady? Maybe she was receiving Lewis as a visitor? One detail, however, is not fixed with reality. As Emily Weeks notes, the lady is placed in the mandarah, or an area of the house that primarily reserved for men, not women, in Muslim culture. (USAD, 86) Lewis traveled abroad for many years in North Africa and even lived in Cairo for ten years. (Burgess) He should have known this fact, suggesting that he purposely placed this lady in the mandarah as a statement against the social order and the ill-treatment of women in the area. Then again, Lewis could have placed this lady in the mandarah to dignify the culture in which he was said to have “gone native.” (USAD, 85) Painted in 1873, during the rise of the British Empire, content in The Reception would have surprised British viewers. (Burgess) At that time, it is known that the British looked down on the cultures that were oppressed by their imperialism. In any case, it is apparent in this painting that the lady is highly regarded.

This art piece is not just a painting of an exotic house in some far away distant land. A prolonged look at John Frederick Lewis’s A Lady Receiving Visitors (The Reception), sparks curiosity of a story about an affluent lady living in a grandeur home who is going against the conventional perspectives of Lewis’s audience. With vivid color, fine details and beautiful form, Lewis helps his viewers to better understand and to see his perspective of this lady’s story and the culture that he loved.

Works Cited

Burgess, Sally. "Biography of John Frederick Lewis." The Victorian Web. N.p., 10 Feb. 2008. Web. 30 Oct. 2011. http://www.victorianweb.org/painting/lewis/index.html.

Lewis, John F. A Lady Receiving a Visitor (The Reception). 1873. Rowland High School Academic
Decathlon Blog. Web. 27 Oct. 2011. http://blogs.rowlandhs.org/groups/academicdecathlon/revisions/c8faa/2/.

United States Academic Decathlon (USAD),. "Selected Work: A Lady Receiving a Vistor (The Reception), John Frederick Lewis, 1873." 2011-2012 Art Resource Guide: Art and Imperial Power (2011): 84-86. Print.

Nyeshia Garland
Pembroke Pines, Florida
"Allegory with Cupid and Venus: Evidence That Folly and Time Can Create Feeling. "

The year 1546 was certainly a great one. Italian painter, Agnolo Bronzino, became revolutionary for stepping outside his usual portraitures and religious pieces, in order to focus on a subject pagan for his time. However, Bronzino’s Allegory with Cupid and Venus is not completely eye pleasing, rather overwhelming. The figures in the forefront are either too smooth or innocent. Not enough light is shed on the shadows of the back. Each and every figure is in motion, some heading right; others left. The painting demonstrates what the Mannerist Period took pride in: cloudy imagery, free form, untraditional themes, eroticism, and ambiguity. Any room for a clear message is limited and hidden.

Seven figures consists of Bronzino’s piece, however it seems like there lies more and more coming from all corners of the artwork. The mask like figure in the upper left corner is portrayed grasping a flowy, blue drape. (A color, by the way, that often connects things that are asymmetrical and curvy.) The calming nature of the color certainly juxtaposes the figure’s facial expression, astonished and angry, which are mirrored in the two masks at the lower right corner. Beside it, Father Time is grasping the drape in a more hurried manner. It seems as if he must cover the atrocity below. So, what is at stake? His annoyed manner convinces that there is a bigger catastrophe at risk.

Below the “it figure” is an old woman suffering from syphilis, an STD, which would act as a warning sign to the two nude, playful figures. She is rendered as Jealousy. However, any evidence of gender is incredibly ambiguous. A dying woman demonstrates that both genders desired Venus. A dying man would have shed light on the Venus and Cupid affair below. Any lusting of Venus from grown men could have heightened her sexuality and unavailability towards both earthly men and the Gods. All the while, the putto at the right encourages the affair by throwing flowers-pink. The throw pillow, pink as well. The color demonstrates that while, the relationship is not passionate and heavy, it can be charming and sweet. This clarifies in one movement. These two are the only figures in the piece that share something very powerful and yet simple-touch and eye contact. These gestures are not at all seductive; we often use them in daily conversation. I feel as though the two highlighted figures are nothing more than child and mother, backing away from an embrace too powerful and too suggestive for the time period. Everything else around them is nothing else but madness caused by the center scene. Shock, lust, jealousy, grief, and disappointment all pertaining to a mother who is nursing her child.

And yet, why Bronzino would render such a subject is not a simple answer. He was a beloved court painter amongst colonial turmoil and Renaissance fashions. Countries were rivals in every case. Every territory wanted a piece of the other, including Portugal and Spain. Fifteenth century pieces rendered movement and expression. However, artists went very little to showcase hurt, sorrow, agony, dread, melancholy, admiration, and depression. Bronzino could be showing his audience that feelings do matter and that society should not have to lean on violence but, acceptance.

Bronzino’s piece may have too many things going on in one setting; however it is exactly this distraction that heightens the moment. A Motherly figure (Venus) and her Son (Cupid) convey tangible love, as loved ones do in current times. The simple gesture is heightened more than intended, creating a blurred line between admiration and lust in a time in which both were separated miles apart.

Works Cited

Buckler, John, Crowston,Clare Hill, Bennett, and McKay, John. A History of Western Society: 9th Ed. New York: Bedford/St. Martin's. 2007.

Cothren, Michael, and Stokstad, Marilyn. Stokstad, Art History. 4th Ed. New York: Pearson. 2010.

Kaitlin Dimick
Bolton Landing, New York

Very few artists can say that they have captured the true feeling of music in their art. Even fewer can say they have captured music as beautifully as the Belarusian impressionist Leonid Afremov in his painting, Blue Rhapsody. With his paint, Leonid creates a vibrant word of sound and color all swirling around the main subject of his painting, a beautiful Cellist lost in her music.

She is graceful and poised, gently caressing the neck of her instrument. Her face is peaceful yet passionate as the bow in her hand moves across taught strings, leaving an enchanted melody in it's wake.

We see this musician's music through her own eyes. Depicted in vivacious color and artful strokes, harmonious melodies radiate from the cellist as her passion fills the painting in hues of crimson, indigo, emerald, and violet. When looking at the work harder, we find that it is not only music that Afremov has managed to capture, it is love as well. This is the love that colors our world.

The emotion in Blue Rhapsody is powerful as you gaze at the Cellist. In the way she holds herself, her serene eyes, and sure fingers, onlookers can tell that the cellist is playing from her heart. Emotion that potent on a canvas is almost entrancing as it captures your attention and stirs something deep within us. Although not everyone has a love of music, we as humans all have something that makes us passionate. This is why we can relate to the cellist in Blue Rhapsody. It is not merely her beauty, it is the power of her pose that touches our hearts.

Blue Rhapsody is a painting that speaks, not only in color, but in power and emotion as well. Leonid Afremov has an amazing way of capturing the sheer joy of being alive. When I look at this painting I feel uplifted and inspired. Blue Rhapsody by Leonid Afremov is, by far, my favorite work of art.

Kimberly English
Forsyth, Georgia
"Christina's World"

Andrew Wyeth was born in 1917 in Pennsylvania. His parents withdrew him from school in his early childhood and relied on their own knowledge of academics, including art education, to homeschool their son. He once said "When I was a kid and the rest were going to school, I was getting educated wandering through the cornfields and the woods." He had an impeccable memory and imagination that led him to follow in his father’s footsteps in pursuing art as a career choice. Primarily working in watercolors, Wyeth focused his work on landscape scenes and often a central character.

In Andrew Wyeth’s painting, Christina’s World, a delicate female figure is depicted with her back to the painter and the viewer. She is wearing a pink dress and her hair seems to be messily blowing in the wind. There is a strikingly different coloration of her upper and lower body. In the background, two buildings are visible: one large, elaborate edifice and one smaller barn-like building. The girl, presumably Christina, is leaning towards the larger of the two. She is in an open field that appears to be mowed incompletely. The sky is grey, and there are several birds near the smaller building.

When looking at this piece, the viewer disregards much other than the foreground image: Christina. Wyeth’s choice of color regarding the dress sets her apart from the neutral colored scene surrounding her. Christina’s position seems awkward and difficult to maintain. She is bearing the majority of her weight on her right hand, and appears to be in motion. If the viewer follows the direction of her gaze, the larger building is the object of focus. If the viewer is studying the “road”, the focus would also wander to the buildings in the background. The intense color contrast between the foreground and background emphasizes the distance between Christina and these buildings.

Wyeth transcends the Modernism era with a feeling of solitude and depravity that words could not describe in Christina’s World. The gothic atmosphere created by the buildings gives the viewer an unmistakable sense of loneliness and abandonment. However, the road without an apparent destination seems to express the concept of good intentions, as does the ladder propped against the larger building. Wyeth makes no mistake in placing the worn down building on the same side of the piece as the lower, unhealthy half of Christina’s body. The other building is being renovated, or at least has a glimpse of hope to restore its regality, much like the still progressing upper half of Christina’s body.

The desperation in Christina’s body language seems most apparent and relatable for the viewer. Her clenched but moving hands express fatigued persistence. Her worn shoes and unhealthy legs make an unresearched viewer wonder about her overall health; a curious viewer would find with research that Christina was a real character that had contracted polio, hence the crawling motion Wyeth had depicted. The pink dress stands out the most in the painting, simply due to its color. This classy symbol of femininity goes unmatched with Christina’s windblown, casual hair and may suggest that there is a struggle between the person that she is by nature and the person she appears to be.

This painting is incredibly successful in expressing the theme of isolation apparent in the Modernism era. Wyeth was passionate about this piece, as the viewer should be. The artist has a way of making the viewer feel compassion and concern for this character that automatically intrigues anyone to lay eyes upon her. Wyeth’s style is crafted brilliantly in this piece. For example, the random, less structured technique of the grass in the foreground compared to the meticulous detail of the same field in the background is not only a mastered skill of the artist; it imposes questions regarding the entire concept of the piece.

Works Cited

Andrew Wyeth Prints. "Biography." Andrew Wyeth Prints. Andrew Wyeth Prints, n.d. Web. 4 Nov 2011. http://www.andrew-wyeth-prints.com/biography.html

Ask Art, . "Andrew Newell Wyeth." Ask Art. Ask Art, 2011. Web. 4 Nov 2011. http://www.askart.com/AskART/artists/biography.aspx?searchtype=BIO&artis...

Mary Moyers
Charlotte, North Carolina

Rhythm, it pulses through the soul, like the dying pulse of a broken heart. “We could have had it all, rolling in the deep….”in her 2011 award-winning music video, Rolling in the Deep, directed by Sam Brown, Adele sings these words in mournful tones. The story of Rolling in the Deep is of a shattered, romantic relationship. Adele, sitting in an empty room, cries out to her lost lover. Over the span of six settings, masterful cinematography is utilized to pull together a piece which demonstrates everything from the heart being broken to the feeling of raging depression which often follows.

The first of these settings features Adele sitting in an empty room, calling out, “There’s a fire starting in my heart, reaching a fever pitch.” The room is desolate, appearing to be part of an abandoned old English manor. Every detail within the room has been carefully attended to by the set designer. The white ceiling has carvings which invite the viewer to touch, to feel. Meanwhile, a crème-colored sheet is held against the wall behind Adele with black tape applied at odd angles. However, instead of being a smooth expanse of paper, it has been carefully creased in various places, which creates a surface that contrasts with the silky texture of Adele’s hair and skin. As she sits alone in the room, she cries out for her lost lover, telling him what he is missing.

But, is he listening to the cries? No, her lover is beneath the stairs on the bottom floor, keeping his own time. As the camera zooms in, the viewer sees that not only is the man in Adele’s video playing the drums, but with each strike of the drum sticks, he is creating electricity. Sparks fly through a light-bulb dangling not far above his drum-set. This creates an intense play of light and dark throughout the scene as the flashing light reflects off of the metal of the drum set and is absorbed by the surrounding “dark corners.”

However, the “dark corners” are not the only part of the house absorbing the frustration of Adele’s lover. At least one hundred water glasses sit upon the second-floor landing of the abandoned home and are packed so tightly that not one more could be fit between them. Vibrating, the water within the glasses ripples, but never overflows. Rhythmic pulsing is shown visually here. The effect is so strong, that without music, one can still seem to hear and feel the beat inside one’s heart.

“Think of me in the depths of your despair, making a home down there as mine sure won’t be shared.” Bewildered, each lover asks themselves what has happened, where their love has gone. One lover scorns the other, devastating the relationship. The other partner remains, not picking up the pieces, but throwing them against a board like china plates. In the video, plates “crash” against a white board forming an ever-growing pile at its base. These, too, create a visual beat. There is a reason why the director used a board to throw the china at and not the wall. Because it is flimsy, the board shakes, leaving the viewer with a more intensified feeling of sound. When a heart breaks in two, it first quivers, twists and then screams. This is what the director has successfully emulated here: the visual sound of a breaking heart.

This beat creates a backdrop for the fight which constitutes the last throes of a dying relationship; each individual partner attempting to salvage what is left of their hearts. In a later setting within Rolling in the Deep, a ninja-esque figure fights with itself, like a man fighting his own heart. The figure dances within a fog of white dust that lay in heaps upon the floor of the bare room. Clear plastic lines the walls, picking up the flow of the dust. The setting is electrified by blue-ish light emitting from a set of long, fluorescent bulbs placed along the top of the back wall. Swirling amidst the dust, the ninja appears to float as though in a dance, lost in the atmosphere. Like someone fighting with their own heart, the ninja seems incapable of seeing through the mist to determine a valid answer. Each romantic partner is left alone, lost in the dust, attempting to cut the other out of all memory.

Only fire is capable of such destruction, erasing all points of reference for a wandering traveler. At last, Adele and her partner are severed from each other completely as a miniature city skyline formed of white shapes burns to the ground. All reference points, all chance meetings, and all loving memories are erased from the mind as Adele wails: “You had my heart and soul” . . . yet beneath this there is a chanting: “Now I’m gonna wish you never had met me.” By saying “never had met me,” she has taken the steps to removing the very being of her lost lover from recall.

The film ends in a myriad of these shots, racing ever faster to the end of the line where Adele takes the volume of her voice from fortissimo to piano, from exceedingly loud to soft, like a heart which has finally given up, moved on, and finished verbalizing its reaction. So often in a music video, multiple plotlines are utilized, a kind of flash effect that leaves the viewer with an overall feeling instead of a plotline. It works quite effectively, cutting out the length of time that a true story would demand. Rolling in the Deep pairs rich textures, a cool blue-white lighting, and a driving rhythm beneath it all to evoke the process of a breaking heart from beginning to end. It is the director’s, Sam Brown’s, ability to take these scenes entirely out of context and create something which is not only coherent, but exceptionally poignant, that makes this music video a cinematic masterpiece.

Anais Corrales
Fort Benning, Georgia
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To look upon his artwork is to look upon another world. An unworldly kind of world that evokes an ethereal spirit that kindles within the very lungs of the spectator. From November 22, 2009 to April 26, 2010, during an exhibit at the Museum of Modern Art, the world was subjected to the fantastical world that is Tim Burton. The exhibit featured a range of Burton’s work from drawings, concept art, storyboards, puppets and costumes from his films and his childhood.

His aesthetic within these pieces of art is instantly recognizable, gaunt-faced subjects framed by rigid and dark lines, and the stillness is sometimes broken by pops of color. Burton tends to create in two contrasting types of art: Surrealism and Gothicism. That being said, it seems as though Burton has also developed a style that is completely his own, and can perhaps be categorized somewhere in the underground and tread-upon Pop Surrealism or Lowbrow Art.

Pop Surrealism, according to Pop Surrealism: The Rise of Underground Art, the art movement is one that “uses pop culture’s castoff detritus to create something meaningful and beautiful…” (McCormick). How fitting, that an art style that is so unique and deviates from many of the art styles that are known today is the very style that Mr. Burton embodies. Burton demonstrates his dabbles with this art style through many of his colored pieces such as his collection of drawings depicted numbers personified as monsters, and his dark adaptation of Little Red Riding Hood and the Wolf. Burton could also fall into the Expressionism style due to his art portraying images with warped perspectives and sharp contrast between light and dark.

Gothicism is perhaps where Burton truly shines being that it is what he is most known for. For most every film that Burton has every worked on or contributed to, eyes have feasted upon a dark and ethereal picture; this aesthetic is what has defined Burton as an artist and it is evident in his pieces from the Tim Burton exhibition. While some may find his dark monochromatic drawings of people haunted by shadows, men with scissors for hands and skeleton kings unsettling, there is perhaps an underlying beauty. Amazing, is it not, how simply Burton can create such striking images even in the absence of color.

Burton’s whimsical and creepy aesthetic had been developed from an early age as he was influenced by many people during his childhood and early career. The works of Edgar Allen Poe struck a chord with Burton, as he revisited the haunting tales frequently throughout his life. Burton had fostered a love for film since he was very young and was a fan of both fantasy and horror films. Burton enjoyed productions from Hammer Films Productions, a movie company that has produced films such as To Have and to Hold, Nightmare and The Curse of Frankenstein (History Intro). It seems whatever was instilled in him from being an audience member of these “Hammer Horror” films is evident in his artwork today. One of Burton’s most idolized actors was a man of horror-the great Vincent Price. Burton admired the actor so much that one of his award winning shorts was titled Vincent and it paid homage to his idol. Burton also found inspiration in Ray Harryhausen, the famed animator who specialized in stop-motion animation and the creator of Dynamation (Ray Harryhausen Biography). From his artwork is it evident Burton was able to draw from his inspirations while still developing his own style, a style that through his exhibition has blended themes of both horror and fantasy (Tim Burton Biography).

During his exhibit in the Museum of Modern Art, Burton was able to showcase his knack for creating visually stimulating pieces of many different mediums that all shared a connecting thread. Through his incredible imagination, Burton’s work has the power to transport its audience to another world. It is this same incredible talent that has, in my mind, likened Burton to other great artists. Both Burton and Salvador Dali share the talent of expressing “unconsciousness that enhances the nightmarish effect of dreams” (The Unique Style of Salvador Dali). The style of Burton’s art is similar to that of Theodore Seuss Geisel being that both artists tend to utilize only pen and ink and their artwork is mostly done in black and white and has a whimsical feel to it. Despite the artists who Burton was inspired by or could be likened to, it is obvious through the works he has created throughout his career and those that were showcased at the Tim Burton Exhibition at the Museum of Modern Art, that Burton is an artist whose style knows no boundaries.

Works Cited
"History Intro." Hammer. Exclusive Media Group. Web. 25 Oct. 2011. http://www.hammerfilms.com/history.

McCormick, Carlo, and Kristen Anderson. Pop Surrealism: The Rise of Underground Art. San Fransisco: Ignition, 2004. Google Books. Web. 02 Nov. 2011. http://books.google.com/books?id=gkMr1b7YNh4C.

"Ray Harryhausen Biography." Ray Harryhausen | The Official Website. The Ray & Diana Harryhausen Foundation. Web. 01 Nov. 2011. http://www.rayharryhausen.com/biography.php.

"Tim Burton Biography - Facts, Birthday, Life Story - Biography.com." Famous Biographies & TV Shows - Biography.com. A+E Television Networks. Web. 02 Nov. 2011. http://www.biography.com/people/tim-burton-9542431.

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Demyah Jackson
Atlanta, Georgia

As mellow acoustics spill out the speakers and Bob Marley’s voice fills the room, a sense of peace is created. Bob Marley’s music has the ability to uplift every spirit, and inspire every soul. The four discs set, Songs of Freedom, is the epitome of his true artistic talent. The sounds created through such a heartfelt series, engages every listener. It is a handbook to life, a preview of the future, and a reality check on the present. Bob Marley’s influences through the Songs of Freedom collection reach beyond his Jamaican roots. The words sung by the lyrical genius can inspire, teach, and touch the hearts of every demographic.

The emotional attributes of the human race are what make art that much more powerful. The ability of artists to exude their inner selves, stories, and experiences through, art, dance, poetry, fashion, and music, while reaching an array of generations and cultures is a skill that could never be taught. For this reason Bob Marley’s Songs of Freedom triggers a passion and understanding of life. He effortlessly used this collection as a diary of his personal thoughts and knowledge through his time of existence. Each disc contains aspects easily related to any listener. The first track on disc number one, Judge Not, demonstrates how he too feels the judgment society puts on civilians. Whether you are from the rural area or the inner city, scrutiny is something everyone can relate to. College students, mothers, entrepreneurs, artists, and politicians each take on different roles in the general public, but each must face criticism or some form of hate through their decisions and course of work. Listening to Judge Not Marley’s opinion and experience on judgment is evident. The song adds to the series and its authenticy.

The impeccable thing about the Songs of Freedom disc set is that there is at least one song that is applicable to every life style. If not applicable it, it is capable of showing a new perspective on life. Get Up Stand Up a track on the second disc is Bob Marley’s attempt to encourage people to stand up for what they believe in. He wrote the piece during a time of oppression in his hometown in Jamaica. People were not accepting of his Rastafarian religion. Tired of the hatred Get Up Stand Up was born. In a world full of injustice, inequality, and corruption to say the least, it is difficult to stand up for what is right, but Bob Marley voiced his feelings and hateful experiences by expressing his beliefs on the matter through music. Every individual however is not born with nobleness or bravery to speak out against the follies of society. Get Up Stand Up gives a different approach to music and what it has the power to do. The track inspired many to stand up for what they believed in, an effect never before created through a simple song. In Bob Marley’s case however, an anthem was created.

The purpose of the collection is to convey positive messages, through stories and personal beliefs. The artistic components of it however do not end there. In fact what makes Songs of Freedom so eclectic is the union of powerful lyrics and euphonious instrumentals. Guitars, saxophones, drums, and pianos are the instruments that make up the Ska Genre. Ska is the combination of calypso, jazz, and r&b. The combination of these instruments and genres is unheard of and unique to the traditional sound of reggae. Each track in Songs of Freedom is so crisp that if someone closed his eyes and listened to the collection, he would instantly become overwhelmed with the sensation the sound induces. One of Bob Marley’s most famous pieces Who Shot the Sheriff is included in the disc set. The song is sung live, and it still has the same power as a studio recorded record. Redemption Song is another single in the collection recorded live; the album is composed of so much variety and equipped with so much power, that even after fifty years of it being recorded it evokes the same emotions and opinions.

In addition one of the most admirable things about the Songs of Freedom disc set is the passion Bob Marley expresses for his music. He doesn’t verbally say “I love music,” however he doesn’t have to. The emotions and patterns in the tone of his voice as he sings, forces the listener to empathize with him. I’m Hurting Inside is not only a record that goes back to his ability to relate to his fans, but it also allows his fans to understand him and what he has been through. As he sings the chorus “I’m hurting, I’m hurting,” his voice shakes as he says “hurting.” The emphasis on the word is important because the song is ultimately based on his pain and cry for happiness. The way Bob Marley purposely stresses and shakes his vocal cords as he sings is artistic in a sense that he doesn’t just want the audience to hear him; he wants them to feel him as well. This type of passion and innovative perspective on music is truly breathtaking.

Songs of Freedom as a unit isn’t just a collection of music. It is a piece of art forever playing in the rooms of young girls and boys, country nightclubs, suburban bars, Grandma’s dusty record player, and most importantly the streets of Saint Anne Parish, Jamaica the hometown of the extraordinary musician. Half a century later and Songs of Freedom continues to touch generation after generation. To Bob Marley’s charismatic stories with hidden messages, to the alluring acoustics that tickle the soul, Songs of Freedom is an album that can never be duplicated. It is what music as an art form is truly summed up to be, and it will live on forever.

Prairwa Leerasanthanah
Bangkok, Thailand
"Mia Wallace, a Gun, and Cigarettes: A Critique on Pulp Fiction's 1994 Movie Poster Reprint"

At a quick glance, the poster can be described to look like a ‘50s vintage advertisement, a comic book, or a pop art painting. This Pulp Fiction poster is one of the most distinct and recognizable posters in the film industry in the late 1990s and early 2000s due to its prominent appearance and subtle film references. Quentin Tarantino, the director of Pulp Fiction, attentively refers to pop culture in the film through aspects such as dialogue, props, setting, and costume in his own style. Expectedly, a great director like Tarantino would have the objective to illicit a response in the viewers with every polished detail he provides in the film. It is no coincidence that everything put in the poster will perform likewise.

This particular version of the movie poster is a 1994 reprint. The original print that was recalled before it was advertised in cinemas was identical, except for a few changes like the gun position, magazine title, cigarette box brand, and airbrush density. They were recalled due to the unauthorized usage of the Lucky Strike cigarette box in the photo that was later airbrushed.

This poster caught my attention because of the weary, realistic pulp magazine appearance. The bold, yellow title that contrasts with the red header stands out from afar and the 10-cent sign makes the poster identical to a magazine. Upon watching it, I realized that the movie is like a series of pulp fiction combined together; organized in no chronological order, the different stories that spotlight different characters cohere by the end of the movie. Hence, the poster is already depicting the tone, story, and title of the film in a playful approach.

I also wondered why Tarantino chose to depict the character Mia Wallace, played by Uma Thurman, on the poster instead of the male lead characters—Vincent, Jules, and Butch. Her appearance on the poster is intriguing and appealing. She lays stomach-down on striped bed linens as she holds a casually burning cigarette between her index and middle finger. Her face expression is simple, yet alluring and cryptic enough to make anyone feel uneasy. The image makes her an effortlessly cool, confident woman staring back at the viewer, saying “ya got a problem?”

Her thick red lips, red nails, jewelry, and black high heels give her a subtly sexy, feminine quality, that isn’t over-the-top spilling with sexual connotations. The position of her left hand and her extending fingers say that she’s an approachable, open person ready to spark up an interesting conversation. The way she flips over the book upside down can also indicate her quick change of interest.

The face-down pulp fiction novel in her hand is called “Harlot in her Heart” (clearly seen with no print over it in the original poster), an erotic story published in 1950 pulp fiction magazine. Ironically, she is nothing like the women displayed in these magazines that were published in the ‘40s and ‘50s. The women on the covers looked helpless; crying to be saved by handsome gentlemen from evil villains. Mia Wallace is on the more villainous side of things herself, being the wife of a gangster. This is suggested by the gun casually lying an inch away from her reach, like the easy beckon of her husband’s hit-men.

Mia stands out from all the other female protagonists in cinemas at the time. In fact, most women in film were not strong protagonists; they were displayed just like the women in the ‘50s pulp fiction magazines. More so, the widely-known films of that decade mainly had male protagonists on the posters and only a small hint of interesting female protagonists. So here is Mia Wallace, a cool female character who is ready to get down to dirty, gangster business in this movie poster, presented by the visionary genius Tarantino.

Why wouldn’t you want to watch the movie and discover what an endlessly fascinating character like her will bring?

Jessica Smith
Rockville, Maryland
"Night Life Critique"

In Night Life, created in 1943 with oil on canvas, Archibald Motley Jr. depicts the vivid movement fused in the painting through the subjects and the organic and inorganic lines used to define different forms in what appears to be a dance hall. There is a lively jazz band in the background, with people dancing and in conversation. The stage is framed with bar paraphernalia, stools, and tables. The analogous colors: orange, red, violet, and blue, create a warm and cool combination that presents contrast of the different shades of clothing muddled in with the background of the dancehall. Motely also reveals the foreground: the man and the woman drinking and smoking at the round table in the front, the middle ground: the bartender serving drinks to the two women at the bar, and the background where the jazz band provides the entertainment for the night. There are different values of color in clothing, the floor, and the faces of the people come from the light source of the dancehall in the top right of the painting; as the light shines down onto the subjects the values of the colors shift to create shadows. The shadows along with the overlapping people enhance the separation between the foreground, middle ground, and back ground and reveal where the obvious positive space is, as well as the sporadic pockets of negative space throughout the piece. As a viewer, one appears to be standing in front of this scene, looking straight at it, with an overall realist effect. Night Life is a glimpse of action at a dance hall in Chicago’s Bronzeville neighborhood, an area of which Motley was familiar with.

The painting focuses on a moment of cheerfulness, vibrant with the sounds of music, dancing, and conversation (Potter). An energetic jazz band in the background guides the movement of the figures gesturing down, up, and to the left and right. The diagonal lines in Night Life “indicate sharp syncopated movement amidst free flowing activity around the dance floor” (Art Institute of Chicago). Motley’s use of creative expression has allowed him to incorporate energy and motion with the group dynamic of a community: African Americans, laughing, gesturing, and mingling with and overall sense of racial pride. His subjects define the “New Negro.” The figures are bold but stylized, so the viewer is not distracted by individual features. The body language of the figures illustrated show an overall harmonious and unified presence that portrays an engaged and receptive crowd (Potter). Motley conveys the sound and motion of jazz through technique, composition, and color, “outlining the figures with simplified, geometric shapes and emphasized diagonal lines, creating a sense of lively motion” (African American Art). “Even as Motely focused on the moment’s thrill inside a night club, he created a microcosm similar to broader outside reality, an allegory of the world” (Art Institute of Chicago).

The African American subjects illustrated the allegory of a group moving away from the economic hopelessness of the time period and moving into what sprung racial pride in the Harlem Renaissance. The African Americans embraced every aspect of their culture in this piece through the jazz music coming from the band to the movement coming from their feet. A strong sense of prosperity is depicted through the fashionable suits, dresses, and accessories worn by these men and women, revealing the intellectualism that is amalgamated into this piece, African Americans challenging the stereotypes. The subject of Nightlife gave Motely the opportunity to present, in his own words, “an expression of the numerous shades and colors which exist in such great variety” (Motley) among African Americans in Chicago.

Rebecca Lancaster
Dunwoody, Georgia

This poem reads with the passion of--in my eyes-- a young girl separated from her object of infatuation. I believe my reading of this piece possesses this perspective because I can certainly identify myself with the enamored author. The young girl sorrows over the distance between her and her love, "I am not yours, not lost in you / Not lost, although I long to be." The separation seems to intensify her need for the mystery paramour. She compensates her lack of nearby love with declarations of simply stated desire. Her allusions of being lost in love fit with the metaphors she provides to explain the depth of her longing. Comparisons between "snowflakes" to the "sea" and a "taper" in a "tempest", convey her belief that love is a great encompassing visitation that often overwhelms humble humans. However, this girl is not pining for a person, she is in love with her own emotions. She seems to be indulging in the effects of admiration, taking delight in how far she can stretch her ardor. She wishes to be overwhelmed by the sensory overload that she believes love generates. Her ideas explain that true affection can be as deep as the sea and she is ready to take the "plunge".

As the poem reads on her passion thickens as the discussion of love begins to seduce her. She cries, "Oh!”, which in my opinion is the most pure syllable of genuine need. This girl is willing to devote herself to true love, even if it means sacrificing "senses" she was born with. In fact, the forfeiture of her senses in exchange with love is preferable in her eyes. She craves to lose all but the feeling of devotion to an anonymous figure. The chosen anonymity of this man is significant. It highlights how inconsequential a partner can be to a young woman who only truly desires a rush of emotion. This leads me to question the notion of love as a whole. Do we honestly fall in love with another person, or are we intoxicated with a blind sensation?

Mairin Blaauw
Cape Town, South Africa
"‘Bom Boys' –Jane Alexander (1998)"

Jane Alexander presents the viewer with 9 child sized sculptures fashioned from fibre glass, synthetic clay and plaster. These figures are a representation of the homeless children, who line the alleys of Long Street in Cape Town CBD, with which Alexander developed a symbiotic relationship whilst living there. The title of the piece has two constituents that were inspired by the graffiti that marks the alleyways: “Bom”, the Afrikaans word for “bomb” and “boys” referring to the gangs in Cape Town that often refer to themselves as such (i.e. Naughty boys, Lonely boys). This extended metaphor of sorts could allude to the societal consequences of the apartheid government’s actions. They stand –feet slightly apart-with open palms on a collection of 36 fibre board squares; looking at neither the viewer nor at each other…each one occupying his own reality. Despite standing together they appear perfectly alone: displaced pieces on the precarious chessboard that has become the game of their lives. Suspended in motion and caught between the shadow of movement and hesitation their glistening eyes paint the picture of sadness that has become their existence. Although anatomically human their subversive mutation into semi animal forms transcends reality; perhaps indicative of the paradoxical relationship each of them shares with his own identity. They are neither of this world nor separated from it but instead appear to occupy a state somewhere between the real and surreal. Each of the boys has had their faces obscured in some way: either by an animal mask, cloth or blindfold. This amalgamation of human and creature implores the viewer to recognize the dehumanization suffered by victims of the apartheid regime and by street children in particular. These obscurities have not been permanently joined in any way to the boys’ faces and thus facilitate the complex nature of identity and the indistinct boundary between human and non-human simultaneously. This visual contrast serves to disillusion the conventional ideas of what categorizes one as “human” and implicitly forces the viewer to engage with the piece on a level that seems to defy the accepted standards of society.

The viewer is drawn to these enigmatic figures; wanting to know more about who or what they are but there is something about the macabre nature of the scene that leaves the viewer hesitant to get too close on both a physical and emotional plane. The boys have all been clothed to varying degrees using found and rendered garments. Some stand clothed to such an extent that their form is indistinguishable beneath their fabric captivity whilst others stand semi clothed…the connotations of which are almost more vulnerable and degrading as someone who is entirely naked. Their pale, discoloured forms speak of something on the verge of disintegration…slowly fading into the backdrop of its own existential crisis. This begs the question of whether they are making a transition from creature to human or whether they are in fact slipping from human to creature. The form of a child has been employed in conjunction with the muscle structure of a grown man to convey the gruesome consequences of malnutrition that is rife among street children. The oversized clothing seems to extend the diminutive size of the boys as they appear to be losing themselves beneath the veiled circumstance with which they have been burdened. Although there is much about them that evokes a sense of sympathy within the viewer the emotional barrier created between them and the viewer renders it very difficult to act on this emotion. Such a division exists because of the absolute rawness of uncensored truth prevalent in the scene yet ironically it is this want for detachment on behalf of the viewer that ultimately brings one closer to the artwork and its symbolism. The boys neither protest their situation nor embrace it; as is evident by the position of their palms –open faced- as if in mild surrender or else desperate imploration. They do not adhere to the expected placement of objects on a gaming board but instead stand on the dividing line between appearance versus reality…between the known and the unknown; towing the line between perception and truth. They appear intentionally oblivious of the viewer: afraid to look or be looked at. Ironically, despite the ordered symmetry of the platform on which the boys stand there is a distinct air of instability bordering on complete disorder that grips the scene. The viewer is left to wait with baited breath in fearful anticipation of the tipping point that will transform the forced attention of the boys into a chaos that begs to be unleashed on a scene akin to that of a perverse game of “Simon Says”.

The complications of the inner conflict experienced by the viewer seems to mirror that of the boys and this shared, silent turmoil between subject and audience provokes an unexpected relationship between the two. In the broader societal context this piece illustrates displacement, oppression, dehumanization, degradation and moral paralysis: the inherent results of the apartheid regime. Alexander intentionally leaves this piece open ended so that the viewer may interpret the scene through the lens of personal experience an opinion. Her work makes for a multi-faceted interpretation of a theme as elusive as the very figures that embody it.